Reflection 1.3

In my third draft I really tried to incorporate more sources and examples than my other drafts. I added a couple more solid examples and used my citations to back them up. I also tried to improve the flow of my paper. I added better transitions so that my paper wouldn't seem so structured. I also now have a longer works cited page. In my other drafts I was more concerned with the actual content and not so much sources, but I realized that is now an essential part of my paper. It makes it sound more reliable than just having my opinion being told. Having every ones feedback in the class was such a huge help. Many of the things that I changed in my paper was due to the feedback of my classmates. I am so glad I had the opportunity to have my paper talked about during class, because it made me see that some of my sentences were confusing and that i needed better citations. I am happy with my third draft and feel I improved a lot.