Say I asked in front of the classroom if I can see a show of hands, how many people have ever smoked Cannabis Sativa, commonly known as marijuana? I bet that I would see that no one raises their hand. Well obviously no one would want to admit to a criminal act in front of a teacher. But why is it that smoking pot is so forbidden in our society?
Numerous famous intellectuals support marijuana. Al Gore is considered to be the leading figure in awareness of climate change and the environment, but few people know that Al Gore also supports the legalization of marijuana. Our founding father George Washington once said, “Make the most of the Indian hemp seed, and sow it everywhere!” (Hemp: The World’s Most Beneficial Natural Resource, par. 5). Marijuana is one of the safest medicinal substances on the planet and is even supported by many celebrity role models, such as famous Hollywood actor Johnny Depp who stated, “I’m not a big pothead or anything like that… but weed is much, much less dangerous than alcohol” (Reich, par, 12). With the support of some of the greatest thinkers and world leaders of all time it doesn't make sense that marijuana is still illegal.
The truth is that marijuana has many benefits to society and, other than the effects of smoke inhalation, has very few negatives. Those opposed to the legalization of marijuana often claim that with legalization of it will come further problems. Some think that legalization would lead to greater drug use, or that tobacco and alcohol cause enough problems and there is no reason to add a new product into the mix, it causes health problems, or even the broad statement that marijuana will lead to more poverty, crime, and violence.
I understand the basis of all these claims and understand where they come from, but I also think that many people just aren’t educated on the benefits of marijuana. The point is that marijuana is not considered an addictive drug, such as alcohol and tobacco which are legal, and is even in fact used for medicinal purposes. Another benefit is that the taxation of marijuana can provide needed and generous funding of many important criminal justice and social programs. Furthermore, with the legalization of marijuana will save a vast amount of money thrown into our jail systems.
If there is one thing that we can agree on it is the fact that tobacco and alcohol use cause many problems in our society today. But marijuana is not the same as alcohol and tobacco. It is not a lethal drug; it is much safer than those two addictive drugs. Like any substance marijuana can be abused, but it is impossible to overdose on. The most common problem associated with marijuana abuse is lethargic behavior, whereas overuse of alcohol will result in an inability to walk, stand, or even death. It is as the famous reggae singer, Bob Marley, once said, “Herb is the healing of the nation, alcohol is the destruction” (thinkexist, par.1). Cigarettes are another legal substance that is far more dangerous than marijuana. Smoking cigarettes is the leading cause of lung cancer in America (Linddell and Armstrong, par. 3). Tobacco cigarettes are filled with harmful chemicals such as nicotine, rat poison, formaldehyde, ammonia, and arsenic (Liddell and Armstrong, par. 8). Both cigarettes and alcohol are immensely addictive phenomenon’s that lead to very serious health problems, mostly cancer, and ultimately death. Marijuana is considered by many to be a dangerous substance but in reality many of our legal drugs are far more hazardous.
Not only is marijuana a safe drug with medical benefits but it could quickly stimulate our failing economy. At its current rate of production legal marijuana generates 35.8 billion dollars per year (Beckett and Herbet 15), these profits from marijuana exceed that of corn and wheat combined. And that’s just the legal profits of legal marijuana. Revenue from illegal marijuana is considered to be around 60 billion dollars a year (Beckett and Herbert 16). That’s a total of 95.8 billion dollars each year. Many economist already believe that marijuana could be our nation’s number one cash crop. It’s already the number one cash crop in twelve states including California, Alaska, and Hawaii (Beckett and Herbert 20). As Thomas Jefferson said, “Hemp is of first necessity to the wealth and protection of the country”. Economists estimate that if marijuana were legalized annual tax returns would be 6.2 billion dollars (Beckett and Herbert 20). That’s over 6 billion dollars in the hands of the government instead of in the hands of so called drug criminals. This money could be spent on combating more serious drugs onto our streets.
If the fact that legalizing marijuana will gain enormous sums of money isn’t enough, it is also shown that it will save enormous amounts of money in the jail systems. Approximately 7.7 billion dollars is spent annually due to the overall cost of enforcement of marijuana charges (Austin and Fabelo 5). Legalizing marijuana would eliminate all of these costs. Another taxpayer expense that would be reduced is prison expenses. A Federal Bureau of Investigation statistic shows that one marijuana smoker is arrested every 45 seconds (Austin and Fabelo 7), so by the time you finish reading this paper more than 20 people will have been incarcerated on marijuana related offenses alone. Also, 88% of all people in jail, meaning 2 million of them, are there due to marijuana offenses. In the case that marijuana is legalized that number will be reduced to 440,000 people, quite a large decline. The lack of operating prisons would also diminish dramatically. The cost of operating prisons comes directly out of taxpayers’ pockets. Currently a 40 billion dollar per year expenses would be cut back to 8.8 billion dollars, still a huge amount but much, much less than what it was. With this amount of savings and profits I find it amazing that our capitalist society hasn’t already demanded the legalization of pot.
The way to compromise the two views would to be to set an age limit on the possession of marijuana, like there is on alcohol and tobacco. They are both considered drugs as well, so why wouldn’t it be the same rules? By setting a limit on the age of possessing marijuana, it will make people become more responsible and less likely to end up in jail. I also think that there should be a limit on how much you can have at one time. This would limit any problems by not having too much at one time.
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1. http://www.dope-seeds.com/untoldstory/hemp_2.htm
2. http://interview.johnnydepp-zone2.com/2001_03Reel.html
3. http://thinkexist.com/quotation/herb-is-the-healing-of-a-nation-alcohal-is-the/406854.html
4. http://annhyg.oxfordjournals.org/cgi/content/full/46/1/5
5. http://www.aclu-wa.org/library_files/BeckettandHerbert.pdf
6. http://www.jfa-associates.com/BlueprintFinal.pdf
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Railey, I applaud you for writing another draft of your paper. This is a persuasive argument for the legalization of marijuana, based on strong, compelling evidence, which you present well throughout the paper. I also really like the way you address the reader directly ("if I asked in front of the classroom," "by the time you finish reading this paper"); it is a striking approach.
ReplyDeleteMy main suggestion is that you make a stronger effort to acknowledge and explore the other side of the argument. I like the way you say "If there's one thing we can agree on," but in general, I feel as though you're just briefly nodding to the other side without really expressing its validity. Take some time with this part, and develop it with evidence. I would also like to see you develop your compromise with evidence--providing detail would help--and then close with a more complete conclusion.
You also need to provide full citations in your Works Cited list. Without them, I can't evaluate your citations or determine if you have two scholarly sources.
Good work so far. Keep up the effective drafting.